Exercise: Choosing content

For this exercise with asked to read an extract of a book by Michael Innes adapted from the Daffodil Affair. We were then asked to make notes on the following questions:

  • If this were to be made into a film. What would the main character be like?

Firstly, I decided that my character was going to be based in the 1940s as the text said during wartime London. However, it did not specify which war. I answered this question based on the facts from the extract and then imagined my own character traits. The facts were that he is a middle-aged man, described as having a fixed contraction on his brow. My ideas without he had his hair neatly gelled back into the side parting is clean-shaven, stern -looking and serious with lines on his face showing years of seriousness and worry. He is clean and neat with a London accent and is a family man. The character is a man that works in Scotland Yard, it does not specify as to whether he is a detective or not. But it says that he controls ‘the file of police papers which dealt with the abduction and subsequent history of feeble minded girls.’ It was quite easy for me to imagine his style due to my extensive knowledge on this period due to my background as a make-up artist. Details like having a man’s side parting on the left is considered to be a defining feature of hairstyles of the period. This meant I had quite a clear image of my character in my head just from reading the story and by deciding what decade he was from.

  • What clothes with the character be wearing?

Brown suit, tie, polished shoes. Briefcase (on his desk). Smart/office worker.

  • What furniture is in the main area in which the action takes place?

In the excerpt, a big desk is mentioned. I also imagined some filing cabinets and file boxes as the man keeps files as part of his job. However, I did not imagine there to be anything else in the room as the description does say that the room is empty except a big desk.

For the next part of the exercise was asked to: Collect a visual reference for the items on our list. Find a reference book or website for this era. Use the Internet to do an image search. Be selective. Don’t go for the first image and counter try to remember your own vision of the story and reflect this in your choices. Stick these images onto a large sheet of paper or individual notebook. I did my visual notebook in my sketchbook and started finding images for the items I had on my list for the character either to be wearing or items of furniture in the room.

I then found some great films from wartime Britain on the ITV website, one of which was called; ‘Routine Job’. It was about detectives in the Flying Squad, Scotland Yard.1946. I am unsure if any of the characters in this film are real or just based on real characters, as I was unable to find any details on this. However, the locations are real and the costumes or clothes that the characters are wearing our typical of the 1940s, and therefore fit very well with how I imagined my character. This film is very interesting and shows a typical day of a detective from the flying squad. During the film, the file room at Scotland Yard is shown. This was very interesting to me as it is probably where the character in our excerpt would work. However, from the description given this is not at all how I imagined his office, nor how it is described. The rooms I saw in the film are occupied by multiple workers and are not in any way empty. I also included some pictures of Scotland Yard’s buildings as when I read the excerpt and imagined the scene, I imagined more modern windows than they actually were, due to the description given by the writer.

The next task was to explore textual and colouristic visual brainstorming and idea generation.

We were asked to ‘choose a word which we feel captures the mood we would like to convey. Collect and create textures and colours we associate with this word to make a mood board. Start with a broad vision to describe the overall colour or tone of the image, not specific elements of it. Be minimal and selective, and gradually add textures and colours that complement the general impression. ‘

I really enjoyed doing this mood board and had quite a different approach with it, from the ones I have done for previous exercises. My chosen word for my mood board was ‘stark’. I started my mood board by adding colours and textures with gouache paint. I also used patches of colour with metallic pencils and markers, then I went around the house and did some texture rubbings. I had seen my fellow students do these on my Lisbon trip and thought that it would be good to try that in order to add textures to my board. I did rubbings of an Artex wall, the steps of a metal ladder, wooden floorboards, the bottom of a saucepan, a woven basket and a couple of other items I found around the house. I really loved the one of the floorboards, but the one that interested me the most was the one of the metal ladder treads as it reminded me of pinstripe material.

My next task was to ‘create a simple portrait (figure, or head and shoulders) of the character, using the reference you have gathered.

‘Use sketchbooks to help you to select and edit from your reference materials and explore where to position your figure within the frame format of the picture make the shape based on any book you have to hand.

Use the colours, textures and qualities you assembled for your mood board to render the portrait. You may literally collage these textures into a drawing, or convey the tonal qualities of the mood bored through the way that use materials and mark making.’

A book I had to hand was this one called Mr Darcy, Vampyr by Amanda Grange. I liked the composition of this book cover and wanted to use this for the composition of my drawing. I did some test sketches of the composition and also some quick sketches to try to put on paper the image of my characters features that I had in my head. This was however quite hard to do.

It was at this point that I realised that it may be interesting to incorporate some of my rubbings directly into my drawing. As you can see from the top thumbnail I tested this out and really liked the result. I went and did some more rubbings of a couple of the textures I liked from before, with varying shades of pressure so that I had some dark for shaded areas and lighter for highlighted areas. I used the steps of the ladder again to create some rubbings for the tie and again for the blazer, but this time by moving the paper in small increments and re-rubbing I created a different looking texture and second type of pinstripe.

For my final image, I cut out sections of my rubbings and placed them on to my drawing. To create my characters suit. Once I had done this, I added shading with graphite to add a further dimension to the drawing.

My Final Image

Reflection

I am overall very happy with how my final image turned out. With each new exercise and assignment that I do. I am learning something new and this to me is very exciting, as most of the things I am doing, I would never have thought to try or bothered to try without these kind of briefs. Therefore, I am finding that my course is opening my mind up to new techniques and possibilities. Even if some of them I do and I then decide it is something that I would not like to do again, it is still good to try and each time there is something that I learn that I can take on to my next piece of work.

The reference material. I gathered was essential in making this piece seem realistic and fit with the era. Even though I did not need to use most of my references for my final image. It helped me to develop the character, and if I was to go on to draw this character in a room or in a story, I now have all of the visual information that I would need to start this process. I had sufficient reference material to create my image in terms of context. I kept it quite simple and the main focus was the suit in which I used my reference images to make sure that it was of the right cut and style as well as pattern and tone.

I would really like to further explore using rubbings in my illustrations in the way that I did here. I started the drawing of the face before I did the suit and then after thought that actually, I would have really liked to have found a way of perhaps using rubbings to create his face as well. I was quite impressed with how I managed to draw his face so well from memory as I did not use reference for his features, I just tried to picture my character in my mind. He did change and develop quite some bit in my head, as I considered the brief more. The biggest change being that I had originally envisioned him much younger, but later realised he would be a much more interesting character to draw if he was older. I realise that his eye is a little big and the other one I messed up and ended up having to shade out completely, when I had intended on shading it, but leaving some kind of pronunciation to suggest an eye.

This was the most enjoyable exercise so far, as I got to be creative and inventive. Had time permitted, I would have liked to have tried more versions of this character using the same techniques for his suit and seeing what else I could do with his face and also redrawing him in the way that I had intended, as well as experimenting with what rubbing textures I could use to create a human face. I do intend on trying this out again soon.

Exercise: Using black and white

For this exercise we had to produce a line visual around one of the following words: Sea, Extraordinary, Building or Journey. Before I started. I had a look through some of my books to find examples of black and white or high contrast illustrations. I have included a few of these here. These are from the book: Masters of Sketching by 3Dtotal Publishing.

I chose images that I liked and that were all quite different. The ones that stood out in reference to this assignment were the images by Daniel pudles and Jan Pienkowski. Daniel pudles work because it is a lino print and therefore lends itself very well to a two colour palette. I really love Jan Pienkowski’s illustrations and although one of them has colour. The main portion of the image would work also in just black and white and uses very interesting silhouettes and lots of varied shapes, that created a piece that really captures your attention. I really took my time looking at it thoroughly, to see all of the different elements and characters within the image. I did also look at some other lesser know artists on Instagram and on a general google search to find other examples until I felt more confident about what I was trying to acheive.

I then started by brainstorming each of the words so that I could come up with some ideas and choose the word I wanted to use for my image.

Once I had done my mind maps I chose a few of the ideas and did some quick sketches to see what would work and which ones I liked that I would want to develop more.

I liked the idea of under the sea, however, I could not think of an idea that would work with this style. The idea I had of the man walking down the street would have worked very well with the style, yet I did not want to create a piece that looked dated. I wanted to try creating something with the old style, but with subject matter that could represent the current day. I therefore settled on the scene with the toddler on a tricycle.

I took my initial sketch and did a perspective drawing. Once I was happy with how it was looking. I then inked over the pencil markings to create the final line drawing and rubbed out the pencil markings. After this I scanned it onto my computer and put it into Photoshop, where I removed the background so that only the line drawing was left and saved the file and printed a copy. I then changed the colours so that they were inverted, I saved this as a new file and then printed two copies.

Once I had both my original and my inverted copy, I then started to cut out shapes from my inverted copy and place them onto my original copy. I used white tack to keep the pieces in place. Whilst I experimented with the placement.

I really struggled with choosing the colours for the toddler and his tricycle as it was hard to see what balanced him well. I therefore spent a lot of time changing his clothes and hair around to see which would work best. The tricycle tyres dictated to some level, what colour I could use for the boys clothing, as I felt it important to keep the tyres black as this made more sense. I would have liked to have the car tyres black also, but then they would have been invisible against the road and the road was more important to have black. This was so that the grass surrounding it and the pavement stood out in contrast.

Final Image

Reflection

I spent a lot of time trying different layouts with the cutouts and found this to be quite challenging to get it to look right. I think that now I have tried the exercise I would perhaps have used a simpler design or designed it in a way that it was easier to colour. However, I would not have understood how to do this until I had tried the exercise myself and learnt from the problems I encountered. I am not entirely sure if I met the brief as it said that there should be no lines left by the end of the cutting and pasting. However, I found this impossible to do and do not think that I could achieve this or know how to achieve this on this particular drawing. In doing so, I would have lost a lot of the important elements like the curb and some of the details on the boy and his tricycle. I found this brief very difficult to and do not feel that the instructions were clear. It would have been helpful to have a simple example of the technique.

In conclusion, I can see how important it is to think more about the design process for each image I am producing. Overall, I am happy with my image, especially as it is the first time I have tried something like this and it is very different to my usual style and type of work that I do.

References: 3dtotal Publishing (2017) Masters of Sketching. (s.l.): 3DTotal.com.